BBM-style PIN swap story

    Two new friends swap contact codes at a market stall. Use the sample script to make a warm, short story and change the details.

    Try it: start from this sample

    Luca
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    Hi Luca, this is Adaeze from the market stall
    2:05 PMR
    Hey! You were the one who sold me the blue scarf
    2:06 PM
    Yes. I forgot to tell you I can get it in green too
    2:07 PMR
    Ha. Save the green one for me, I am back Saturday
    2:08 PM
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    The story of a first message

    In the keyboard-phone years people swapped short contact codes to add each other, and the first message after the swap was the awkward bit. This story is that message. It is a friendly business-meets-friendship scene, with no drama beyond a scarf.

    ChatsRat is not affiliated with the original service, which has ended or changed, and nothing in the sample is a real code. Do not put real codes, numbers or addresses in a mock-up.

    Writing the first message well

    A good first message does three things: it says who you are, it names the shared moment, and it offers a small reason to reply. Adaeze does all three in one line. The reply then confirms the memory and makes a small promise.

    Notice the light scheme in this sample. Daytime market scenes look natural on the lighter screen, and it makes a pleasant contrast with the dark BBM-style stories on neighbouring pages.

    Turning it into a series

    The last line, a promise to return on Saturday, is a built-in sequel. Your next image can show Saturday's exchange, with the D and R marks on your bubbles telling the viewer who has seen what.

    Voiceover on the Creator plan can narrate the scene in one calm voice, or give each person a voice of their own. Match the tone to the warmth of the writing.

    Tips

    • Introduce yourself with a first name and a place, never a full name or contact detail.
    • Reference a physical object, like a scarf, so the memory is vivid.
    • Close with a plan, even a vague one, to make the viewer curious about what happens next.
    • Keep the whole exchange friendly; this look suits warm scenes as well as tense ones.
    • Put a caption on the post marking the scene as fictional.

    Questions

    Can I show a real PIN or code in the chat?

    No. Keep every code, number and address invented or leave them out. The point of the story is the greeting, not the data.

    Does the look have a contact or add screen?

    No. It draws the conversation window. The swap itself happens before the first message, and you can describe it in a caption.

    Which plan is needed?

    The BBM-style look is on the Standard plan. The Free plan loads the first four messages of a sample and exports a PNG. See the pricing page for details.

    Is it affiliated with the original service?

    No. ChatsRat is not affiliated with, endorsed by or sponsored by the original service, which has ended or changed. The look is original artwork.

    Use it for simulated, labelled content. ChatsRat makes mock-ups and fictional conversations for creators, designers and teachers. Do not use it to pass off a made-up conversation as a real one, to impersonate a real person, or as proof of anything. See the Acceptable Use policy.

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